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You did an adequate job of framing the main requirements of this assignment. You also put forth several salient points that you view as relevant in your effort. While you did a good job of framing the overall topic, I did not see any type of analysis as relates to supporting your position and the key point of your assignment. Again, your points seem to be relevant but in the absence of analysis, examples, insight, among other items, it is hard to tell what exactly you’re trying to accomplish because it does not make a logical point and close out the point. You need to understand that WOW premise as it is so incredibly important as you put together paragraphs because not only will affect you in this class but in your future academic endeavors. You must support your point with academic evidence as well as analysis, insight, examples, among other items. When this does not occur then the effort seems be very vague and the paragraphs fragmented and incomplete. Lastly, there were a number of mechanical errors in this project.

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The Legal Environment and Diversity

For this Capstone assignment, you will identify 5 legal and diversity factors that impact an organization. Then, you will create and present 5 strategies HR can implement, based on these factors that will increase productivity in the workplace.

Develop a well-written paper that addresses the following:

• Examine employment regulations and policies that impact diversity in global organizations.
• Identify 5 tools that will help you identify issues before they arise, in relation to diversity and inclusion in the workplace.
• Propose 5 strategies that human resource professional can enact to create an inclusive culture in the organization.

Requirements:

• Write a 5-7 page paper, or about 2300 words, not including the title and reference pages, which are required.
• Your paper must be properly cited and formatted according to the CSU-Global Guide to Writing APA (Links to an external site.).
• Include a formal reference page. This is an individual paper, however, you should reflect on our discussion forums and incorporate ideas from there, as appropriate.
• You must support your analysis with at least three scholarly references, and can include resources from this course.
• The CSU-Global Library (Links to an external site.) is a good place to find these sources. You cannot use Wikipedia or any CSU-Global assignment. For this assignment, a credible source is defined as:
  • A scholarly or peer-reviewed journal article
  • A government-based website or publication
  • A trade or industry journal article, publication, or website, including those from trade organizations such as SHRM.org and TD.org.

To view the full requirements of the Capstone Project visit Module 8.